tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487651032830668930.post1079190653469351296..comments2024-03-24T16:53:26.189-05:00Comments on Big Anklevich: Anklecast 26: One Million MilesBig Anklevichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09436070868726323659noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487651032830668930.post-16339105249876917252015-10-06T11:16:12.921-05:002015-10-06T11:16:12.921-05:00Sorry this comment comes so long after you publish...Sorry this comment comes so long after you published the story, but I'm just catching up. <br />Loved the story. Glad to see you writing and producing stuff. My only feedback on the story would have be around the very last line.. From what I could get from such a short story, I didn't feel like the character would be willing to commit to ACTUALLY going to Mars, but he would certainly waffle back and forth.. So at that moment, he was a million miles away, but the last line, which was something like, "But soon I'll be 140 million miles away..." is a thought in his own head. So it left me wondering if he was really committed, or just really able to lie to himself.<br /><br />Either way.. Thanks for the story!Clokwrkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06800201986292402098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487651032830668930.post-64566624603125090862015-05-15T09:18:12.762-05:002015-05-15T09:18:12.762-05:00Hey Big. I find your closing montage of motivatio...Hey Big. I find your closing montage of motivational qoutes to be very...well motivating. I also like the idea of you writing a story for the Anklecast every month. If you want me to record one of them to save you time, just let me know.<br /> Journey Into...https://www.blogger.com/profile/15134160667747640028noreply@blogger.com